I’m sitting on a rooftop
Praying for your star to fall so that you might return to me
x-x-x-x-x-x-x-x-x
Of course the heavens wanted you
The Gods, those selfish beasts
They called you to join their ranks
To lead the likes of the universe
But only mortals who die a hero’s death
Might keep their company
And so you left, eternally fighting
For your life and my heart.
x-x-x-x-x-x-x-x-x
I don’t know how I got here
On this strange rooftop
But before they drag me away
I’m praying for the heavens to fall
So that you might return to me
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Another random… thing.
Originally, the last line was very different, but it made her seem suicidal. Better to end it sweet, in this case. (Or so I was told/thought) I would love to hear your thoughts, your critique! Also, advice on Category? I need help learning what goes where~ |
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I'm sorry that I have no crituqe,
but I just think this is wonderful!
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it was a bad day. the sun exploded;
the earth roiled and tore entire cities asunder;
the bus in front of my car crashed violently and everyone died;
i ran out of green tea.
~ ohsostarryeyed
You're too kind!
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it was a bad day. the sun exploded;
the earth roiled and tore entire cities asunder;
the bus in front of my car crashed violently and everyone died;
i ran out of green tea.
~ ohsostarryeyed
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*´¨ )
¸.•´¸.•*´¨ ) ¸.•*¨ )
(¸.•´ (¸.••*¨Coco¯¨`*•~*´¨¯¨`*°º¤ø,¸,ø¤º
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